Folded laundry
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I appreciate your posting this but I don't really see folded laundry in this in an interesting way. Please rethink the prompt and reshoot. Your image should be more about the folded laundry and less the rest of the items - or at least make sure the "laundry is the star - also be careful about the lighting - this image is a bit on the flat side. If you have questions, see me during class.
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DeleteI reshoot my folded laundry picture. Please check it. Thank you.
Now I need to have you rethink the exposure. Your overall image appears to be flat (perhaps underexposed?) and could use a better light source. What do you think?
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